You were right

the first time!

I'm not sure what drurywalker is talking about.. Bourgeoisie refers to the middle class, yes, but at a time when aristocrats were the highest class. It NOW refers to what we know as upper class, the wealthy. In marxist theory, there were proletariate (working or low class) bourgeoisie (the wealthy merchants and owners) and the aristocrats (wealthy by virtue of birth). The class struggle was a struggle between the bourgeoisie and the proletariate as the aristocrats were rapidly loosing wealth and power as systems changed.

Anyway, without going too far into political history... great flash! Just thought I'd let you know you were right the first time.

Unoriginal, but not bad...

Kind of a bit too much of a happy tree friends knock off. It was pretty unoriginal. Even the animals voices were just like it. Not too bad though. kinda funny.

Brings me back!

Thats pretty cool! Nothing special but I like what you were trying to do. Nice.

It also helped, I have a student who wanted to learn this on violin and I had no idea how it went. Now I do! Thanks! Points for being helpful. haha

No no no....

Holy.. I think thats awful. The beat sounds really cheap. Like off a casio keyboard I used when I was 4. There isn't really a tune there at all. I can hear the beginnings of one but the terrible synth effect used hid it. Change the drum loop and change that synth for the melody and maybe it'll be better. Also, try mixing a bit better. Those drums are peaking alot.

Not so great...

I didn't really think this one was so great.. Vocals were very flat (both in key and tone) The horns were really cheesy sounding, but they sort of grew on me. lyrics weren't so great, the tune was repetative and lacked much creativity. The drums were a bit messy. On beat, just too much unnecessary stuff going on there. I think the vocals could be improved if you practiced slowly to a chromatic tuner making sure you hit each note. Try and train yourself to know where each note is by feel. You might also look into broadening your chord progressions with suspensions, 7ths, 9ths and just all around cooler progressions. Try finding different ways of making the chords you want by inverting the notes, changing the fret possitions etc.

PS, I'm going into detail because I thought it had enough in it to improve on, not trying to bring you down! lol